Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are some countries where the significant growth of superstore businesses causes the failure of local small trades. To a certain extent I disagree with the idea that this situation could bring any risk for local communities. However, I accept that it can have a negative effect on local companies.
The advancement of superstores could bring the huge commercial failure for a local small store. It offers consumers to purchase various items in one place which is both time-saving and stress relieving, unlike buying from different stores separately. Hence, they prefer to buy from supermarket rather than local stores which bring the closure of local commerce for the need of customers. A recent survey shows that in Bangladesh, 20% of local market stores closed their business within 2 years after the superstores such as Shapna had initiated the business. This means that the more expansion of supermarket would leave a few customers for small businesses.
However, I would argue that above mentioned situation could not decease for a community. The development of super stores could ensure the quality of life for members of community. They will need to spend less time in shopping and become happy to utilize their time with family. Beside this, a superstore requires a large number of workforces to accommodate the customer services, and they recruit them mostly from local people. Thus, they can enjoy their work from home. For example, after building a superstore Shapna, many people employed in that store and they enjoying their job better than others. This have reduced the community unemployment ever been before.
In conclusion, though the superstore businesses bring challenges for local businesses, I do not believe that it could wipe out any local community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ily. Beside this, a superstore requires a large number of workforces to accommodate the customer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23776223776 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69641862154 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8371210062 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246455558286 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834115000053 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772494445532 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184272302172 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080571180781 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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