Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
For a job applicant, it has been so common to write personal information, including interests, or marital status on job application forms long before.The personal details sometimes do provide employers to recruit right employees, but sometimes the personal information is irrelevant to the post or to an applicant's capacity at all.
In fact, most employers love to know applicants' background for their consideration in hiring procedures; therefore, they hope to have your personal information to understand you better so to put you in the suitable position in accordance with your self-statement if they need you work with them. For instance, if you are one of travel-lover and social type persons, an employer will know you are potentially good salesman.
However, the personal information sometimes is irrelevant to the work applied at all. For example, a remote computer engineer needs works at home and employers know nothing about his marriage or interests. A good cook better shows his reputed dishes, rather than his interests of traveling or dancing.
In my viewpoint, I will see what job I apply so to write my personal information or not. It is my privacy and I will write honestly only when it is necessary. I think my professional experience and working performance report should well prove my qualification for the applying job unless the company requires -personal information a must because of bias on marital status or some other reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22978723404 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10421375732 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.0355855941 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.555555556 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228390167142 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910614778619 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593023529567 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134765011404 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329614923042 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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