Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss
With the advent of globalization, world economies are changing at rapid pace these days. This phenomenon has catapulted many nations across the world. This essay will discuss both positive and negative views about globalization.
Beginning late 19th century, globalization has uplifted many poor countries from poverty and positioned them in worlds top economies. Forbes magazine, global economic powers, survey results show that, economies which are poor two decades ago have grown significantly by allowing economic reforms. Which indicates that countries have progressed by opening the doors for global businesses. Not only a nations economy has changed but unemployment problem was also addressed with introduction of globalization. Hence allowing globalization helped addressing unemployment and uplifting a nation’s economic condition.
However, globalization has its detrimental effect too. With increasing globalization, people spending has raised, which led to increased consumption and inflation. Although affordability has increased due to handsome salaries, inflation has diminished its advantages to certain extent. Governments’ in the name of globalization, are supporting certain big corporations by providing huge land bank, by clearing forests which has adverse effect on ecology. And in few countries capitalists are influencing government policies in favor of them, which is a dangerous sign, isn’t it? Globalization has changed people and governments’ mindset to fulfill few greedy capitalists, which is a dangerous sign. Above all, we are not supposed to destroy mother nature in the name of globalization. However, if we continue this trend, mother nature will unleash its fury to recuperate from the damage done to her by us.
This essay has discussed both advantages and disadvantages of globalization, although there are certain advantages, disadvantages outweigh advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...doors for global businesses. Not only a nations economy has changed but unemployment pr...
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Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...sed with introduction of globalization. Hence allowing globalization helped addressin...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to address' or 'address'.
Suggestion: to address; address
...on. Hence allowing globalization helped addressing unemployment and uplifting a nation&apo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10294117647 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42744084975 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2585789668 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6470588235 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13385470379 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457602333542 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038714892954 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830674110492 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453602107439 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.8 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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