Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Although, languages are the crucial component in the life of every human being that allows us to communicate with others. However, numerous languages are extinct annually and presently, certain masses ponder that less languages in the globe makes living more convenient. I completely agree with the notion that life is less complex with fewer languages.

There are multifarious points to endorse the viewpoint. First and foremost, mutual relationships with people in the community enhances. To be specific, if major section of society speaks in the common language that is easily understandable by all improves the mutual understandability between that society. Furthermore, learning becomes easier when certain languages used on daily basis by the folks. To demonstrate, in educational institutions, if the learning syllabus is in single languages then it is more reliable for students who are from different cultural backgrounds.

Further emphasizing, several dying out languages are really difficult to understand and need more experts that have knowledge of those languages. To illustrate, Sindhi is one of the extinct languages and to revise manuscripts written in that language need an expert and invest lot of time and capital for that, which is useless. Consequently, life becomes complex regardless of easier if certain languages are not extinct.

To recapitulate, language is the part and parcel of life. Undeniably, dying of some languages not only makes life less complex but also give opportunity to build mutual interests, preserve money and time in order to make a better future with ongoing languages.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although, languages are the crucial component in...
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Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun languages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...d presently, certain masses ponder that less languages in the globe makes living mor...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...from different cultural backgrounds. Further emphasizing, several dying out language...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5421686747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03804577011 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598393574297 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1538461538 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27024768267 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982387684952 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461304702565 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165776803627 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365004788713 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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