Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population’s sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sugar is one the sweetest substance which is produced from cane and made available for everyone at a subsidized price; as a result most people are getting ill by consuming this in large measure. Some individual's cite that governing authorities should manage people's sugar consumption. Others, however, quote that it should be the responsibility of people to look after their eating habits of sugar.
Excessive consumption of sweet substances leads to devastating health results. First of all, heavy intake of sugar could result to diabetes, as sugar is the simplest form of glucose it will directly affect blood cells. Secondly, there will be a raise in weight of the people, as sugar consists of non digesting components such as sucrose, which will make people lazy. Finally, all the things consider, there will be a burden on government's budget on hospitals, because, many countries are providing free health for the patients who are suffering from diabetes and obesity. This is the ultra prominent reason that people believe that management of sugar supply should under government's sphere.
Even though sugar is considered to be most addictive substance on the planet, people should be self-responsible on its excess consumption. In this informative world all the food products are self descriptive with nutrition fact, commonly known as ingredients. Therefore, it is the responsibility of an individual to check the sugar content and decide upon intake. To keep up a balance between health and sugar intake, there is a need of good physical activity which has to be carried-out individual himself. Although taste buds always urge for sugary content substance, it is an individual control which can help in restraining from such consumption.
In conclusion, sugar is one of the important contents for good health, however excess consumption will lead to several health problem and such problems can be avoided by an individual control over sugar intake as Government cannot have control on the sweet consumption of individual’s food contents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...management of sugar supply should under governments sphere. Even though sugar is co...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...however excess consumption will lead to several health problem and such problems can be avoide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36923076923 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97292874544 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4094223182 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425311597997 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153952348663 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906807021925 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273113649535 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041455865858 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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