Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address to these problems? What can individual people do?
As many developing countries are in the process of industrialization, environmental degradation as a consequence of this process has become a global problem. This essay will examine two main contributors of this looming issue and offer viable solutions which should be implemented by both governments and individuals.
The underlying root of the problem is global warming and our burning of fossil fuels is increasing the greenhouse effect which is endangering all lifes on the planet. However, some measures can be taken in order to resolve this problem. The ruling bodies should invest heavily in solar and wind projects in case reducing our reliance on fossil fuels. Even if governments take action, it will be futile if a large number of people is still pumping harmful emissions into the atmosphere. Therefore, people are supposed to cut down on exhaust fumes from their cars and try to use public transport if we are to mitigate air pollution.
Another major reason of the issue is the extinction of a vast array of animal and plant species which emerges as a result of deforestation. The increasing world population and nationwide factories are putting pressure on natural resources, cutting down enormous areas of rainforest which lead to habitat destruction, recourse depletion and need to be solved. Take recent Australia forest fire as an example, substantial proportion of species became extinct. Governments can impose a stringent regulation on a detrimental bodies for the environment. At the individual level, people need to be aware of disastrous outcomes of the actions against living creatures and should embark upon preserving them by stopping harmful activities.
In conclusion, although governments and individuals are destroying rapidly our planet, by altering energy sources and reducing the alarming rate of emissions, problem can be significantly diminished, if not altogether eliminated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46127946128 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13176927274 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5350830348 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153092391791 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522760256239 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448727525125 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921108484912 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281992528784 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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