Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Fresh water consumption have raised to an alarming level ubiquitously, despite its low availability and conservative natural sources. Overpopulation, high living standards and modernization have given flames to this burning issue. In contrast, pragmatic strategies and notions should be adopted by citizens and higher authorities altogether to mitigate this dilemma. Hence, consumption should be abated to the extent possible, followed by introducing alternatives to water on global level.
Apropos to the 21 century, an immense upsurge in water consumption and demand have been observed by scientists, overpopulation, being the top problematic cause. As a matter of fact, modernization and development have drastically reduced and polluted fresh water resources. For instance, recent study have provided strong evidence that usage of water for washing is 70% greater than drinking purpose. Moreover, due to easy and effortless availability of water facility in cities; wastage is a common practice among citizens. Ultimately, depriving other needy states of normal water supply.
Education and creating awareness among humans across the planet to save water and promoting sensible usage is the ultimate step to handle this pressing issue. Firstly, on the individual level unnecessary usage should be banished followed by adopting a balanced approach. secondly, higher authorities should set a usage limit accompanied by implementing taxing policies and serious penalties for consuming beyond limits. Thirdly, campaigns should be designed and awareness should be developed by mutating thought patterns and widening horizons of knowledge to solve this devastating issue worldwidely.
In conclusion, a balanced and thought provoking approach should be adopted globally associated with equal water supply across planet. Water linked wastage and consumption should be downsized to the extent possible by implementing strict regulations, strategies and expanding horizons of knowledge to national and international levels.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...llowed by adopting a balanced approach. secondly, higher authorities should set a usage ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03819444444 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10409481336 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2979187496 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100820094144 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367697607494 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189063294502 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631118615287 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197805255913 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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