Living in today’s modern society, children often want to commence their professional life since childhood. Although some feel that the government must restrict them to do full-time work, I feel that children support their family by working regular hours.
Firstly, many parents are working round the clock in order to cover the basic needs of their family. However, sometimes they are still not able to do that. Nowadays, part-time jobs are not sufficient to fulfill the needs of a family so, children often work full-time to support their family. In addition, the motivating factor for children to get a full-time job is the salary difference between full-time and part-time employees. A good illustration of this is Mcdonald’s, where a part-time school student often earns less than any full-time employee. Consequently, children prefer to leave their study to earn more for their family.
Another reason why I believe the government should allow children to work at their underage is the company’s hiring process. Many companies prefer to hire full-time employees than the part-timers as companies usually invest lots of money on them by providing basic trainings. For example, many IT companies hire professionals to give basic computer trainings to the youngsters which costs them astronomical so, they always like to hire those children who can work 9 to 6.
In conclusion, not only underage children usually support their families by earning early, but they also get more real working experience. Therefore, I believe that government must not restrict children to work full-time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot restrict children to work full-time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42629482072 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90934873989 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565737051793 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0757422203 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.769230769 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242912035081 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100903049256 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801059731298 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15726913275 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566992393606 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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