A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by a human, so they should have the same rights as a human. Others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including used for food and research. Discuss both views?
In the era of technology, living conditions are involving dramatically, which leads to the fact that awareness of humankind towards environmental issues. Regarding this reality, a kaleidoscope of people bear a thought that exploitation of animals should be prevented, which means that allowance which is similar to human ought to be awarded to the animals, while there is an argument arising that these species must be used to meet abundant demands consisting of food as well as experimentation From my perspective, there are reasons to be figured out relating to those two views, therefore, I am unbiased on the. In the following essay, we will discuss the elements of why people would think in such ways.
On the one hand, there are a variety of origins of why people are not to be permitted to take advantage of animals. Firstly, it is demonstrated that these creatures are studied to have their own emotions of feelings as humankind. Hence. rights of those should be given recognition. A typical example is that dogs are proven to have cried before leaving the house that they live in with their owner for a long period of time. Secondly, this action can make a contribution to the protection of our bio-diversity. Image if there were no predators such as lions, leopards, and tigers in someday, the number of their prey including herbivores and smaller carnivores increase uncontrollably due to the wildlife would be unbalanced. In short, the group of people following this viewpoint should be taken into consideration.
On the other hand, that a number of people hold a belief that we should maintain using animals for an abundance of purposes, should not be ignored. Specifically, these species play a pivotal role in the way we acquire our requirements of food production along with the approach to developing medicines. For instance, there are a large number of mice which have died in the progress of medical growth, this helps save thousands of lives
In conclusion, it is seen with ease that huge plenty of benefits have been through the exploitation of animals, however, it is unable to deny the fact that those must experience pains or hurt as mankind, which is acceptable to give them the same rights. As far as I am concerned, governments should hand in to enact to optimize the merits as well as restrict the other side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91919191919 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91060194168 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558080808081 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.044058595 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.142857143 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299729727514 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861514308315 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071248433663 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160611309395 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039701059811 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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