Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with example and relevant evidence.
Happiness is essential for everyone and people express pleasures in different manner. It is quite often debated, what all includes in delight and hardly people able to elaborate in precise manner. I shall explain the challenges in interpret happiness and also mention factors to achieve delight.
Contentment is not like money which is possessed by only few individuals in world. Conversely, it is felt by human being, even animals and birds as well. There are different styles and factors involved in expressing the cheer and feel the joy of being joyful. For instance, hungry people may feel content after consuming stale food where as rich person may be delighted to throw it and order fresh foods. This leads to facts that there is no concrete way of defining happiness and its parameter.
Though justifying definition of happiness is hard, there are broad factors which may help to achieve happiness in life. The primary factor for being happy is to be independent and based on the experience recorded by millions of people, if a person is not granted a right of freedom, none other thing can make him or her happy. This is one of reasons that world human right organization defines the bare minimum parameter for person to live a dignified life. For instance, many people from china leave their magnificent home and take shelter in developed countries like United Kingdom, USA owing to not allowed speaking freely and expressing their concerns. Another factor in obtaining delight is do what you want to do. Many people in this world complain about jobs or profession as they either do not like it or not apt in performing their duties. As a result, people feel discontented and demotivated.
To sum-up, all living things on this planet experience happiness in their way, thereby, it make it daunting tasks to elaborate happiness. There may be various factors involved but important one’s such as freedom, choice of work may help in achieving cheerfulness in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, may, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02121212121 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.657665594 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.444338793 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134501576132 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442678806221 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430133467581 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874287999977 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037373322941 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.