How do movies or television influence people’s behavior?
Determining what drives human being and its behavior has been a major concern for the last century. However, at this time, there is not consensus on how technology could shape our behavior. Even though many would argue that television or movies have little impact in people behavior, I think that television has a huge impact in shaping peoples characters, due to cultural, sociological and psychological reasons.
First of all, Cultural Issues. Despite having satellite TV, cable TV or Neftlix, the cultural programs are in retrieve. Moreover, in these days people are not watching any culture on TV they prefer programs such as realities or series. This is a big change in people behavior, in other words, people do not enjoy watching ballet, Opera or science program, and this change is in my opinion a consequence due to new programs on TV. For example, my kids used to love watch NatGeo Wild programs, but ones I got Netflix they only want to see cartoons.
Secondly, the amount of time dedicated to watch TV or movies is becoming excessive and its natural consequence is a change in the way we socialize. Is a sad true that these days’ people do not have long conversation with others because they are captured by TV shows. Keeping in this train of thinking, I think that because of TV people are suffering an impairment of its relationship
Finally, but the more important, psychological changes. I remember when I was a child, my parents always told me: TV shows an imaginary world. Nowadays, kids are confused by realities shows which claim to have “real life “ on TV, moreover they think that perfection is a must, furthermore, they have suffer changes in their behavior due to frustration of not having the perfect bodies , smiles or clothes that TV shows. For example, when my daughter sow her first reality, called “my sweet 15” She experimented anxiety and frustration because she wanted to have the same kind of parties, which she thought it was the “normal “life of everybody.
In summary, on the one hand, TV and technology have the power to improve people’s life but on the other hand, it has consequences in people’s behavior that should be considered and analyzed. Moreover, no matter the type of TV, we must keep in mind that watching TV is shaping people’s behavior through cultural, sociological and psychological ways
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02261306533 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89494840226 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550251256281 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8254972921 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9375 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0625 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28256563587 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872423153988 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742093670826 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166523450055 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662102377424 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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