Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed. While other believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, human activities had a bad effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some person thought that is not alter. While others can take efforts to change this. in my opinion, it is a major problem all over the world, if they gone as like, so the humans do not live on earth. I will discuss my views on upcoming paragraphs.
Some people think that it is not be alter. Because this problem is carry on from bygone era. It is a major problem. Premier league, with the advent of new medicine, Doctor do not give medicine directly to patient. Even the experiment of animals, because due to death of animal, they do not take serious issue. In addition, in modern era, population is increasing day by day. People cut the forest firstly, due to generate a particular building for people living., they cut the plants and trees. It is very effective in their life of humans. Because every human needs it natural breath that will be given by trees and plants. Is that this problem is going on that way, the time will come people do not survive on earth.
In other hand, government should take steps for those person who cut the trees.Even they create a new lawif any person has cut the tree they punished by government. Moreover government should take efforts for change it and address it.
In my opinion, if the problem is gone as like, So the people do not survive on earth and they affect from pollution and suffering from many diseases.
In conclusion, every people has their own views. I do not deny any of them. But, I cogitate people was think that, if they cut the trees, they do not live on earth. Moreover, the doctor has also think, if they do experiment to animals, they take care of animals,because animal is also like a human.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e people think that it is not be alter. Because this problem is carry on from bygone er...
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...nt to animals, they take care of animals,because animal is also like a human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52681388013 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36367926534 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498422712934 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9527420819 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2272727273 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4090909091 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176916678156 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590423236074 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065155489991 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986414355435 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775432068504 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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