An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
It is indisputable that the internet has transformed every aspect of our life and this has been both advantageous and disadvantageous in many ways. Similarly, in the last few years e-shopping has become the trend. This essay will give an outline about the pros and cons for the seller and buyer of shopping online.
First and foremost, when a person wants to buy a product, he can browse for what he wants from anywhere. This means there will be no need of commutation and a lot of time will be saved by the customer. Furthermore, in case we want to gift our beloved ones, purchasing through internet and delivering it to their preferable address seems to be a convenient way, than couriering through mail. Moreover from the companies’ point of view, there will be no necessity of establishing retail outlets or employing sales staff, which will serve as major cost-cutting and also they can easily keep track of the competitors’ price for the product and decide theirs’ accordingly.
However, the main drawback for the individual is that he can never be sure about the quality of the product. For instance, when the customer surfs for a shirt; the color, texture and size may be different from what he had expected. Even more, the buyers should also be cautious about the security issues related to the web, as there are chances of hacking their website, which may become a doom to their business. Additionally, it will be a tedious task to win the purchasers’ trust as there will be hardly any physical meeting with the customer.
In a nutshell, as in case of any advancement of technology, even online shopping has its own edges and downsides and it is finally up to the customer which method of shopping they prefer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ient way, than couriering through mail. Moreover from the companies' point of view,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87959866221 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9200676366 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2248992175 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182244621284 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640242291786 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481434719678 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109926046153 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371096654487 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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