An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

Essay topics:

An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

Internet has changed human life's in significant manner, People are habituating to buy what they need in online. As coin has both sides, Online shopping also has both positive and negatives as described below.

Due to globalisation people ordering what they need over internet as they can choose plethora of options and its saves lot of time and energy. In addition to it, companies saving their money as they don't need to open a retail stores or outlets to run business. Furthermore, It is also helping supply chain industry by creating new jobs. People are choosing products by comparing from different competitors and getting benefit. For Instance, Amazon selling same product in a discount price when compared to other competitors. Customer would go with where he gets low price. Companies marketing their products through consumer email id's as they register while purchasing and saving revenue on advertisements. To the other side of coin, There are some disadvantages also with ordering online.

People will not be able to feel or touch the product until the product gets delivered. They may not predict the quality and best fit to their need. In addition, Few surveys has given deep analysis saying online shoppers are in perilous situation as they isolated socially. Gaining trust from a customer also a tough task for companies as they do marketing without feel of a product. Similarly there are some security issues also while we pay money through payment gateways. For example, Recently my friend ordered a watch in online and it never delivered as payment gateway had been hacked.

To recapitulate, Online shopping has both pros and cons but we can overcome the cons by browsing in security enabled systems and creating awareness on cyber crime related issues.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12027491409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63676239215 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5834837939 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6470588235 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287507043771 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790560212587 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696701523537 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17857096742 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944765831567 0.056905535591 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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