International university study has become more popular these days as more and more students each year plan to do their graduate or post-graduate studies in a foreign country. What do you think are the reasons for this? And, how will this affect societies in the future?
Give reasons and examples from your own experience.
Each year millions of students travel from their home country to begin university study. After finishing high school or bachelors students from around the world follow their dreams to pursue either undergraduate or graduate degrees from various top-level institutions around the world. This has a major impact on the development of local and global society. The key reasons that many students opt for university study abroad is to gain valuable graduate diplomas and social experience which in turn results in economical and technological growth in their societies.
Many of the highest ranking universities and famous faculty are found in countries other than where students reside; for this reason, students are motivated for travel. When students earn their knowledge and degrees from these universities, they not only get much better paying jobs, but they also contribute greatly to their field of science. For instance, students who graduate with a law degree from Oxford earn no less than 200,000 USD per year regardless of which country they practice. Furthermore, students with high level law degrees are able to improve the legal systems of their societies in the future. This is one of two reasons students move abroad for tertiary education.
A second key reason for doing university in another country is to form relationships with peers and professors in novel cultural settings. These connections broaden students’ experiences and become valuable resources for future life, such as potential business partnerships. For instance, the Oxford law graduate may eventually have high profile clients that they studied with pr met during their stay in England, thereby improving their notoriety and business. This type of globalization will leads to improvements in local economies.
In conclusion, a strong education with quality certification and valuable social connections are chief reasons that many students choose foreign universities for study. This helps societies to improve their technological and economical states. International study improves both personal and social life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6320754717 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86634659504 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3273108303 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276324750723 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963367885745 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301672233575 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179809263758 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105812417893 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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