The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.
With the development of modern technology, the internet has emerged as the most widely used source of Information and Communication, worldwide. Some people opine that there should be a certain degree of restriction over this, while others opine that there should be no restrictions. I, however, support the latter point of view and the following essay will provide the justification.
Internet enables us to remain updated with the latest information. The changes in the job market Trends are the latest offers on products can all be accessed within seconds via the world wide web which helps people make better choice quicker. For example, when coronavirus became pandemic, people were instantly aware of it due to the news published on the the internet because of which people were able to take necessary precautions before the disease affected them.
Communication has also become much easier and modernized. Previously, people could only talk via telephones. But with the availability of the internet, they also see their friends and family who lives miles away via video calls. In addition, they can share their news, photos and videos conveniently and instantly.
However, jar can be some negative impacts of internet. Many antisocial people could use it to buy illegal products like drugs or become involved in cyber crimes such as hacking. But with the constant monitoring from cyber security division and alertness of the public these negativities can be eliminated.
To sum up, I believe that there should be no restrictions in the use of internet as it provides facilities like latest information and faster communication although there could be some bad implications it can be controlled with proper measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ware of it due to the news published on the the internet because of which people were a...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ware of it due to the news published on the the internet because of which people were a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30545454545 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87255695698 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4617439887 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273464782059 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807564050382 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073386581536 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153312429153 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851939252225 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.