It has been proved that smoking kills. In some countries, it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Cigarettes contain tobacco, which leads individuals to bad mental as well as physical conditions.
As it is scientifically proven, many countries’ government has banned smoking either completely or at least on public places. All countries must make this illegal as it creates a bad impression on juveniles. Another reason is, although it gives temporary relief to one’s mind, smoking could leave detrimental effects on the person.
Nowadays, smoking has become ubiquitous in most countries. Many governments have successfully posed severe penalties if citizens get caught red-handed while smokings. People believes that smoking at public places encourages teenagers to smoke without any concrete reason. In turn, it becomes a habit for most adults and corrodes their lifestyle too. For example, most Indian teenagers had influenced by people who smoke in public place. So, the government had been come up with a set of harsh monetary penalties by encountering bad living standards of youths at such an early stage, particularly at public places. As a result, the Indian government has contemplated severe decline in smokers at public facilities. Thus, the intensity of new smokers also decreased.
Consequently, many smokers believe that smoking gives them relief from stress and numb their mind for several minutes. Many governments believe that though it gives temporary mental relief it could be harmful to one’s mental and physical wealth. For example, the American government had imposed the imprisonment penalty to smokers at public places. As a result, they also found the sharp decline of smokers at public vicinities. As per the recent census of the American health ministry, it shows less number of cigarettes additives. Additionally, It can be seen as per the Times of America recent survey that smokers has marginally left smoking. Plus, they confess, it improves their creativity at his or her workplaces, which improves their confidence and thus it permits them to live healthy and focused long lives.
To deduce, banning smoking it so important that any government does not want to see the scenario of unhealthy youths as they are the true assets of the country. Therefore, I strongly believe that it is quintessential for the respective government to imply harsh penalties on the smokers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41873278237 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92775132079 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567493112948 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5680867124 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169979813813 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541177865489 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611524082396 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872569163148 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718560117534 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.