It is not nessesary to travel to other place to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from book, films, and internet. Agree or disagree?
Nowadays people can easy to learn culture of many countries in the world without traveling to those places. I do not agree with this idea because go to oversea can help us gain alot of knowledge more than we expected.
First of all, traveling abroad will be more exciting for us to learn and explore their country. It is the fastest way to stay connected with local people, involve to their daily life and aboriginal culture. We can walk down to the streets and enjoy their specific street foods, or directly see their traditional clothes that inhabittant usually wear everyday. For example, Thailand have very famous mango sticky rice that we cannot taste via movies, internet. People may enjoy the colorful Carnival Festival in Brazil that will give them the unforgettable moments that a quiet book cannot bring up.
Secondly, go to other country is not just learn the culture but also live in these cultures too. We can blend in people, nature, scenery and totally enjoy our lifetime in the new places. Another reason is having new friends from many different countries from the trip and we can exchange our cultures between us. It will have more things we can learn from unexpected way that we will never know but we will be appriciated so much from our journey.
In conclusion, traveling is the better way to learn the culture around the world than books, movies or google, and it will be the fun and memorable way too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76706827309 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34835730238 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1146005064 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.9166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322386386586 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108173725108 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674081770409 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176007400538 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845943382918 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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