It is thought by some that it’s better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People are divided in their view regarding whether living in country side is better or urban center. In my opinion bother arguments have some valid points, however, I still believe that living in urban town opens door of career progression and financial development to individuals.
On the other hand, some people believe and I agree, that city life brings so many colossal benefits. Firstly there are plenty of opportunities for job and doing business due to the proliferation of population and availability of big companies. People can earn more money and become wealthier by working hard. Many business tycoons have migrated from rural areas and created massive wealth in urban places. Secondly, by staying in city people can broaden their horizon by meeting various individuals involved in different field such as science, engineering business and so on. As a result their social circle will Increase, which will really help them in their future career and business sphere. Lastly, the city life offers so many luxury and comforts which are not there in at country side.
On the other hand, it is thought by many that rural places are very much peaceful. There is no traffic congestion or bottleneck. By living in country side one can enjoy the natural beauty of such places like, pond, river mountains, farmlands and soon. Another thing to consider here is the cost, as there are less population. Moreover, most of the farming happens at country side therefore. The cost of cereals and food grains are much lesser than city. This means people can have lot of saving which would be eventually be good for their future.
In conclusion, people may vary in their opinion, but in my point of view, though the countryside brings joy of living in a soothing environment and less cost to live a composed-life, the development chances and opportunities to create wealth offered by urban towns are very much essential to consider.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opens'' or 'open's'?
Suggestion: opens'; open's
...still believe that living in urban town opens door of career progression and financia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, another thing, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03426791277 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62564156979 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3334370099 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7647058824 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151703297761 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435192959667 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577736986297 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990339965772 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493772934979 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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