Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
According to recent studies, the number of crime has decreased considerably. However, some researchers indicate that despite this significant reduction, juvenile delinquency is rising quickly worldwide. In this essay, I will consider a list of reasons for this increment and suggest possible solutions to it.
Let us start with causes for the sharp increase in the number of young criminals. The first reason is associated with poor upbringing. The majority of youth offenders commit a crime because they come from disadvantaged households as well as are unaware of consequences. For example, in Kazakhstan young people take lessons about life in society, but usually in prison and with criminal records, which make their lives worse. Another reason is related to the shortage of money. Many youngsters break laws, if they are unable to find a job and therefore experience a lack of income. Thus, after the analysis of the reasons it is clear that crime among youngsters is acute and needs solving.
Nevertheless, some researchers suggest that the problem can be hardly tackled unless people take the following actions. Firstly, governments should provide children with proper parenting in childhood. The way forward could be for officials to attach teachers to troubled families, so that they can teach would-be citizens more about crime and inevitable punishments. For instance, this approach can be see in Kazakhstan, where the teachers regularly visit dysfunctional families to monitor the situation in the households and take preliminary steps to help children avoid violating laws. Secondly, authorities should ensure employment for young adults. This problem could be addressed, if councils created more workplaces for citizens in their twenties. As a result, after the consideration, it is obvious that the problem with young criminals can be handled effectively.
In conclusion, although there are many reasons why the rate of immature lawbreakers is booming now, I believe that it is probable to deal with this negative tendency, if the government adopt the above mentioned measures.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47076923077 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92881057102 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606153846154 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1043426083 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7777777778 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211396301965 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619908474758 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523652307261 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127455031846 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639045616745 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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