Limited money should be spend on computer equipment or good teachers. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is crucial to consider that how the expenditure in education should be. Whether such limited amount of money should be spent on high quality teachers or on computer technology in institutes. In my view, nowadays, balance of both of them are important for students’ future prospects. In this essay, I will explore both side of the arguments and present my opinion in conclusion.
To start with, the technologies these days are changing and developing rapidly. In order to adapt themselves with these hi-techs, the students have to have some hand-on training of it. For instance, the children who are not trained on computer machines and do not know the fundamental of them, in future they might feel their knowledge obsolete. Furthermore, it is imminent that in future most of the professions will be based on such technologies in some way or another. Therefore, institutes should contemplate to spend a part of money in computer equipments, so that, students can learn those skills as well.
On the other hand, one cannot neglect the importance of good mentors in education institutes. Tutors are helpful in many aspects for adolescence; they not only provide high-quality education but also guide them through their career. If these instructors will not be there in schools, then, it would be inevitable that students will get demotivated. To illustrate this, when a student make mistakes, his/her examiner not only show him how to correct those mistakes but also motivate him to not repeat such mistakes again. Nevertheless, it is equally important to spend limited money on good tutors as well.
To conclude, although technologies such as computers are essential for educational purposes to keep up with the trend, however, good efficiency teachers are also important for students’ personal growth factors. Therefore, money should be spend on both computers and tutors as per the necessity of the institutes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91485841573 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4202896749 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265627829944 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921561017751 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926717876624 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181015497807 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834601909146 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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