A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Tourism plays a significant role in preserving and maintaining historical and traditional value of a country. As per the stated notion, it serves as a major source of generating revenue in most places. Although, there are concerns regarding environmental damage and cultural exchange, I believe the advantages far outnumber the disadvantages.
First of all, influx of tourists in developing countries can cause environmental issues. To explain this further, lots of travellers visiting the monuments and historical places each day ruins the uniqueness and crowded places often cause damage with risks like erosion, pollution and the loss of natural habitats. However, with proper management and regulations, this problem can be resolved. To cite an example, building of enough hotels and arrangement of transports in popular tourist sites have paved the way in tackling limited facilities to a large extent. Not to mention, tourism provides country a source of income in developing infrastructure, healthcare facilities as well as educational funds. Also, it provides job opportunities to local people providing sightseers a guided tour, hospitality and entertainment as well.
Secondly, cultural exchange is the principle problem caused by tourism. To simplify, local people are more likely to be influenced by western culture in terms of language as well as modern lifestyle. For instance, dominating nature of western culture seems to underestimate one's own traditional and cultural values. People residing in local area are lured by foreign food, clothes and intimate foreign language. Thus, forgetting one's own traditions and customs. Despite of the above fact, mental horizon gets broadened when a person comes in contact with different language and culture. As a result of exploring outer world, people gain profound knowledge and develops understanding and bridging the gap between different nations.
To conclude, ensuring proper management and regulation helps in maintaining and preserving tourist sites can reduce damage to environment. In addition, exchange of foreign language and culture is far more beneficial and should be up to a certain extent provided that one should value his own gold tradition completely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66071428571 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06805254658 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610119047619 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1069066919 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163297043511 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472951344436 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493191126543 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885147862785 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365447767986 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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