Nowadays, young children started working and earning money in many parts of the world. But some claim that it is totally wrong whereas other group proposes that this work experience is precious for children to get work experience and to become responsible in the life. However, In the further paragraphs, I will present my views and opinion on these arguments.
To commence with, many people think that childhood is to play, to study and to enjoy but not to work and earn money as they are not capable of handling the burden of work and stress. In addition, in some countries, as there is no strict laws for child labor, this issue has been significantly increased. That is the reason why children should not be allowed to work and not hired by any employer illegally as well.
Considering other side, there are many countries where high school or college students work part time to earn money for extra expenses. This teaches them to spend money carefully and to be responsible for the work as well. Apart from that, Work with studying can give them exposure to the competition of outer world. Overall, there are some benefits of working in the early age.
To sum up, both groups have their reasons to support their arguments. But, in my opinion, as long as child is willingly ready to work and we should allow them but the government should also make sure that no one is forcefully abiding them to work. I too think that exposure of market demand and gaining work experience while studying really help them to grow and become responsible in the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72161172161 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42214576534 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8324618512 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334933008035 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119240432568 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785895405107 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216291761696 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066853952194 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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