In many countries, eighteen is considered the right age to start driving a car. However, some people say that the legal driving age should be twenty-five. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Looking into the figures of recent road accident surveys, it emphasizes on having more responsible and sincere drivers on the road. The constitute of most of the countries considers eighteen as the suitable age to drive a four wheeler whereas some intellectuals assert that the legal driving age should be kept at twenty-five years.In coming paragraphs, I would like to discuss both the aspects from my perspective.
Universally, youngsters are eligible to give a vote in the selection of a government in any democratic country. Voting right, itself is considered as a huge responsibility on a shoulder of youngsters to elect right person in the government.Moreover, in many countries, civil laws give legal right of getting marry after the age of eighteen years which depicts the age is a mature enough for the youth.At last, the labor law of many nations allows starting working as a full-time employee that considers their physical and psychological fitness to handle any stress. Hence, a driving car also allowed in these countries at the completion of eighteen year due to the consideration of this age as a mature and strong enough to handle any situations.
On the other hand, most of the youth is living a student life at the age of eighteen where intellectuals do not find any need to provide car facilities to them. Furthermore, after the completion of student life at the age of twenty-five, the person enters into the professional world that enforces a responsible attitude in them. For instance, they value hard-earned money and life, so that they drive with more sensitivity and care to avoid any accidents or overrule of traffic and driving regulations.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the student age is a very tender age when they should not allocate rights to drive heavy vehicles. Driving four wheelers by vulnerable can lead to many uninvited problems to the public and themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0664556962 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05578082114 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560126582278 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.128167865 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.1 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374758561818 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129658577011 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991811179998 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219739610047 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518307191334 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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