In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
Nowadays, world turns to a small village and people can communicate with each other in various ways by using technology and it brings some opportunities for individuals to work or study overseas. Among all people single, young individuals are more interested in leaving their home country and migrate to developed countries to access better education and job. Although this scheme would have some negative effects on the society and family, I believe the advantages by far outweigh the disadvantages.
There are some main reasons why I would argue that this is a positive trend. Firstly, individuals who leave their home and start a new life without the support of their family are more independent, self-sufficient and confident and they have the ability to handle their difficulties in a fair way and make decisions much faster and consequently they would be more mature. Secondly, they are more feasible to access decent educational facilities which would open doors to better job opportunities in the future. Finally, it would make less pressure for families who have to pay their children's expenditures after certain age. A salient example of this is USA that in 2008 reveals some statistics about the increasing amount of family independency among youngsters.
On the other hand, the disadvantages of abandoning the house in order to access different work or education should not be neglected. The most severe problems for young people who leave their home and migrate to foreign countries are the language barrier, culture shock and home sickness which will traumatize them and have some detrimental effects on them. Furthermore, societies will encounter with more scattered families who live all over the globe and the family ties will not be as strong as they used to be in the past. As a result government should provide more nursery houses for taking care of the senior citizens who live alone. To prove my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that in 2012 the USA invested more than 2 billion dollars on health and caring issues for elderly people.
In conclusion, more young people are interested in living alone and work or study somewhere else which will provide them some advantages not only in learning some interpersonal skills but also in being more independent and successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a fair way" with adverb for "fair"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13802083333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78548829494 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7804094789 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.928571429 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221215665781 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747264324278 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049370910285 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148766552262 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035899225799 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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