In many countries the problem of drug-taking is increasing. Governments and the general public are particularly concerned about young people using illegal drugs such as marijuana, ecstasy and heroin.
What methods could be used to prevent young people from taking drugs? Is it appropriate to send young drug-users to prison?
The intake of illegal drugs such as marijuana, ecstasy and heroin has so alarmingly soared in several nations that, the political authorities and other masses, who are specifically bothered for their youngers, who have fallen prey to this, can not escape the thought of them going astray. Fortunately, there are some steps which can be taken to keep drugs away from the young ones and sending them to penitentiaries would not be a good idea.
Beginning with such methods, I would say that an individual can decide to take such drugs in particularly two cases, either he is dealing with a lot of stress in his life or he wants to do an adventure as other of his age experience or enjoy. He might not find drugs as the solution to stress, if he has met with awareness about the heinous consequences that take place as after-effects of consumption of such highly inappropriate consumables. Moreover, if he is properly guided by his guardians, that there are many other ways of having fun and experiencing thrill, along with this, if he is taught to be decisive while choosing what is wrong and should be avoided at any cost, then that individual would stay away from these health-destructing drugs. Apart from this, the easy availability of these drugs also makes it less difficult for them to get it which can be altered if the situation faces reversal.
Talking about jails, I would say that such places are home to those who are not fit to set free in the innocent society due to their ill-mindset. When and if young drug-takers are placed among them, the influence is bound to infect them with malicious thinking and devastate their immature innocence. What is more, once their name enters the criminal recoreds, the stains of this action remain stagnantly on their profiles and it may severely hinder their career prospects. They should not be made to undergo such a big turmoil. Intsead, they should be relieved of such habits with the help of professionals who work in this domain.
To conclude, it can be said that undeniably, this is a big issue, however, not as big as incurable. With proper preventive measures, count of drug-takers can be reduced to nil. Also, prison is not a solution to this, it can be very harmful for them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, in particular, such as, talking about, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7641025641 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75270950137 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55641025641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6323006259 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190979528595 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693607334319 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354729513654 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118279066826 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358548669954 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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