Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
Some prisoners after being freed often misbehave and cause harm to society again. From my perspective, ostracism and the inability to earn money are the primary culprits for this trend while the most feasible resolutions are rehabilitation and collective support.
Criminals are continually marginalized post-release. People often entrench deep-seated prejudices towards them and refuse to interact with these individuals. The alienation of the community can incentivize them to commit further misdemeanors as they are unable to integrate into society. Another cause that should be enumerated is that former criminals can not find jobs to make a living. A study shows that about one-third of people who were once sentenced to imprisonment are unemployed. The collective stigmatization and failure to subsist can trigger them to slide back to their old lifestyles again.
There are several promising solutions that can tackle the issues. The government should establish rehab centers where instructors are to educate jailers and ascertain they will never violate the laws again. Another approach is to redress the anecdotal fallacy that criminals always menace others even when they are out of the bridewell. Everyone should have a cooperative attitude toward these individuals; the acceptance and succor from others make them feel belonging and attached to the outside world. This, therefore, mitigates the chance of re-committing crimes. A notable example is Finland where the ratio of criminals coming back to jail is negligible because every citizen accommodates with each other regardless of one’s background or history.
In conclusion, I believe that troubleshooting otherization and making sure all prisoners will be hired after release will refrain them from going to jail again.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, third, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99625738198 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7539884988 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159807056282 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051596609122 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349300059852 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889366844837 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167336056252 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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