It is evident that many criminals re-offend crime after releasing. There are some important reasons why they resort to offence and some solutions will be given in the following.
To begin with, there are two main reasons which caused criminals attend to commit further crime as they leave jail. Firstly, having prison record makes finding a job difficult. Simply put, many corporations and business owners do not trust to recorded individuals. They think recorded people have more possibility to do illegal and dangerous activity due to their former experience. Also they all try to create a healthy and peaceful environment for their employees to get better output. Secondly, prison is a place that put criminals together and provide a condition that they can make friends with each other. This in turn, may lead to creating bigger gangs after releasing which could be more detrimental for society.
There are, however, some workable solution to cope this problem. One step would be implementing markets that trust recorded people and give them opportunity to show themselves. Most of these offenders have proficient skills, committing crime by an accident, not by own interest. For example, some of them are imprisonment, not affording to pay dowry. If society do not provide a job opportunity for them, they force to commit other crimes to provide money to pay their lives expenses. Furthermore, governments can use other punishments that have lower negative effects on society. For instance, other penalties such as fines or community services could be better for minor crimes than imprisonment. To put it differently, it not also reduces jails expenses but also offenders re-pay community that would be more beneficial.
In sum up, I believe that re-commit crimes after releasing mostly return to not finding a proper job and also become friend with other criminals and learn their crime’s methods. Implement job opportunity and also other penalties for minor crimes both could enhance the situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ctivity due to their former experience. Also they all try to create a healthy and pe...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'committing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: committing
... a job opportunity for them, they force to commit other crimes to provide money to pay th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27725856698 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7203843601 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591900311526 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3753027785 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1578947368 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20151734698 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630713288592 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483189581816 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127814689876 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514207857135 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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