Crimes are prevailing considerably all around the world due to not having stringent laws against them. it is stated that, certain offenders continue criminal activities even after coming from prison.there are some reasons that are linked with it and suggestions of tackling methods also needed. Both solutions and causes will be discussed in following paragraphs before going to an conclusion.
It is not to deny that, after getting release from jail, many lawbreakers carry out their misdeeds again owing to some factors. The pivotal reason behind this is that criminals have to face misbehavior of common people towards themselves through which they failed to get respect and that force them to do the same as before. For example, in Australia, approximately 35% offenders commit crime again under the circumstances of bearing negative comments from society after being released from prison.another main factor is that, acute shortage of strict regulations create security in criminals mind before committing any sort of mishap. Hence, it is enough to prove why re-offend is occurring.
To curb the menace, there is a urgent neccessity to take effective approaches by police department and governments to deal with criminal happenings by released offenders. Firstly, life time imprisonment should be given to those who continue their illegal practices after being caughed ones.for instance, in UK, after the implementation of this law authorities have become successful to control nearly 75% re-offends. Secondly, awareness compaigns need to be lauched to educate criminals and common people on social media. Which would be a promising idea to create fear in everyone's mind towards crime.thus, these above mentioned appropriate steps can make the world a better place to live in by making it cime free.
In conclusion, after throwing light on reasons and controlling methods about increasing criminal activities by released criminals, from my perspective, there are several factors that forces the offenders to lead their again. However, by taking plausible ways as soon as possible the root of crime can be eliminated as a whole.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ragraphs before going to an conclusion. It is not to deny that, after getting re...
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...gh to prove why re-offend is occurring. To curb the menace, there is a urgent ne...
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...penings by released offenders. Firstly, life time imprisonment should be given to those w...
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...lace to live in by making it cime free. In conclusion, after throwing light on r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41441441441 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88606243581 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651651651652 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5544569759 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.692307692 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198720884183 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634817113357 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406084207476 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120142034689 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391300455403 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...not having stringent laws against them. it is stated that, certain offenders conti...
^^
Line 1, column 380, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...in following paragraphs before going to an conclusion. ...
^^
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ragraphs before going to an conclusion. It is not to deny that, after getting re...
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Line 2, column 780, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gh to prove why re-offend is occurring. To curb the menace, there is a urgent ne...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... To curb the menace, there is a urgent neccessity to take effective app...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...penings by released offenders. Firstly, life time imprisonment should be given to those w...
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Line 3, column 802, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lace to live in by making it cime free. In conclusion, after throwing light on r...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41441441441 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88606243581 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651651651652 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5544569759 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.692307692 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198720884183 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634817113357 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406084207476 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120142034689 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391300455403 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.