Many governments think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. discuss...
For the last years, people in many countries have become more consumptive and materialistic. Today, the main concern of most of us is money. We are less interested in our spiritual development, than people used to many years ago. Authorities are trying to develop our economical advance, while other branches of our life, such as art, music, education are slowing down. Let’s discuss advantages and disadvantages of this tendency.
Economic progress is very important aspect in every countries life. If our country doesn’t have an appropriate budget, it won’t be able to maintain our educational and sport facilities, different entertainment arrangements et cetera. In modern world we can’t do anything without money.
However, folks so caught up in money earning process, that they forget about other values of our life. Contemporary people want to live in luxuries, drive expansive cars, have a newest model of smartphone, and the list goes on and on. But what is the purpose of that all? We took some much for granted, that we no longer enjoy real gifts of the nature. Youth don’t visit theatres anymore. Instead of that, they watching senseless movies on their own costly devises at home. I think, that such tendency will make people forget how to talk each other.
As you see, I think that government should pay more attention to other aspects of our life and don’t spend all time developing economic. We need to remember that the matter of our life is to leave a posterity, to support our nature, to be happy at all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...gress is very important aspect in every countries life. If our country doesn't have ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...in luxuries, drive expansive cars, have a newest model of smartphone, and the lis...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225705329154 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.156739811912 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100313479624 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313479623824 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0721003134796 0.0437548338989 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109717868339 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.025078369906 0.0403226058552 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80087506822 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313479623824 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.00626959247649 0.00163938923432 382% => OK
Determiners: 0.0626959247649 0.0861772015684 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00940438871473 0.021408717616 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00940438871473 0.011925033212 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1555.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02713178295 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352713178295 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255813953488 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193798449612 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139534883721 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80087506822 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68992248062 0.56093040696 123% => OK
Word variations: 85.8213008647 60.7387585426 141% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1764705882 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1775129016 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 127.492653851 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.814263465372 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 40.7578659371 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.38554216867 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285821160204 0.332605444948 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0610451475766 0.102741220458 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0636925514697 0.0668466124924 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449145025268 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150668914998 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964828902648 0.134430193775 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602031623437 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.209548809666 0.324371583561 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0895163318422 0.0638462369009 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162342981852 0.228012699653 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568837440422 0.058150111329 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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