Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people to visit these places?
Historical sites in Petra in Jordan are annually visited by millions of international visitors. many foreign tourists flock around the Rose city to marvel the narrow canyon, which has temples and tombs dating back 5th century.It is noted by a recent survey done by Department of tourism of United States that local people are relatively less interested in visiting these places compared to the foreign visitors.
Generally, one would see that local people are not intrigued by the archaeological findings of the place vis-à-vis a traveler from a different place.People tend to see the site regularly en-route their workplace, such that, the places loses its unique charm to the local residents of the place.For example, many residents of Mumbai may not value the iconic structure of Gateway of India, an arch-monument constructed to commemorate the landing of first British royalty in India in 1911.Also, the Tourism Ministry of the country does not give much information to citizens as much they include in the information brochures circulated to people on tour.Hence, it is obvious that the attractiveness of the museums and
In order to encourage the local people to visit museums and historical sites, the government bodies should include regional educational curriculum of children.This will enable the children, parents and teachers of the students be acquainted with the facts of such special attraction.Further, local festivals could be hosted in the place to create awareness among the residents.Every year, Kala Ghoda arts festival, Mumbai’s biggest multidisciplinary cultural event brings to life the arts district of Kala Ghoda in South Mumbai.This festival is hosted in backdrop of many of the city's heritage buildings and prominent art galleries.Also, local tours could be arranged by the local Municipal authorities to emphasis the importance of the place.
To conclude, to engage the local population, it is imperative for the Government Authorities to make them aware and provide people with experience aligned to their interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29850746269 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89498994951 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605970149254 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8399401344 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.785714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358829338012 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109916079339 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082718381032 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222118130021 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349565060286 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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