Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive.
discuss these both views and give your opinion.
Contemporary music is often in discussed nowadays, many people trust that latest music have negative impact on adults. Howerver, others that it has lot of positivity on younger generations. In my opinion, modern music is showing negative impact on individuals which will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, lyrics that are being written for songs are not appropriate. Various lyrisists (are) mixing languages while writing the songs, which is not understable to young people. In addition to it, music composers are composing music with high notes which is not good for mankind as there is (a) limit specified by health organisations which should not be crossed. An article recently published by the Times in landon (London) has stated that, 30% of younger generations hearing impairment (hearing or facing hearing impairment) is in risk due to high notes of music composition. Furthermore, too much abusive or restricted words are being used to attract youngster such as drugs and sex which is not good for society.
Secondly, contemporary music (is) attracting pupil by composing in lame language. Individual can understand easily and there is no need of looking for dictonories (dictionaries) to understand unlike past. Moreover, fine tuning and refreshing notes are also introduced by using various technologies which are more intune with youngsters. Various bands operationg in the United States of America releasing their albums regulary and these composers are between the age of 15 to 20 years who is making a lot of revenue with the influence of modern music.
To recapitulate, modern music is playing vital role in younsters and allowing them to make revenue as well as hear a lot of good music to enjoy their time. Although, using unparliament language in lyrics and high notes which are not worthy to go for. In my view, modern music impacting negatively on young generation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17049180328 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84671364105 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8351245209 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273951438648 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100616983223 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116044579136 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199200147705 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130178397571 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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