Many people believe that name brand items are very important. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.
In this fashionista century, brand names become the demand of the modern society. However, variety of names incorporated in the market under different brands that allured major section of the community. This notion has many positive and negative sides that are discussed in subsequent paragraphs along with my opinion.
There are multifarious points that endorse the darker side of the statement. First and foremost, price of the brand items is threefold higher than the non branded product. To be specific, goods purchased under the brand names are more expensive, that can shatter the whole budget of an ordinary person. As a result, the brand items are out of pocket for a common man. To demonstrate, if a person buys a brand shoes worth 700 dollars, whereas, other person buys the same quality non branded shoes for 150 dollars then the second one saves some money for purchasing other thing.
To embark with advantages of brand products, firstly, the quality matters a lot before buying any product. As in case of brands, quality is much better and the item stays longer without any damage instead of the unbranded materials. Secondly, branded items are more comfortable and looks quite impressive as compared to the local brands. Thirdly, now brand becomes the status symbol so that factor also allured people to buy these items and show their wealth to others. To illustrate, people buy expensive goods such as household items, clothing, watches etc. just to show off their wealth.
To recapitulate, undeniably, every coin has two sides, similarly brand names are vital part of the life in this century. I fully agree with the advantages of having brands in our life as this provide not only comfort but also available in best quality. Even though, the positives are more so negativity can be neglected easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 237, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...ide not only comfort but also available in best quality. Even though, the positives are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, third, thirdly, whereas, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06291390728 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51944109662 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2503918839 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9411764706 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228742863053 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686738030784 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406643254437 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131763377406 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321376153698 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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