Many people believe that teachers can influence the intellectual and social development of children, more than parents do. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
While the effect of teachers on students' development is substantial, there is a controversial debate on the extent of their influence on children in comparison to the contribution of parents. I personally believe that teachers have a more important role than parents in the intellectual and social growth of adolescents due to various reasons.
Advocates often highlight the fact that teachers are more experienced in dealing with students. Thus, not only instructors studied psychological and pedagogical courses during their training, but also have they been exposed to a lot of students, giving them invaluable knowledge. It is also worth mentioning that dual-income families are very usual these days, left little time for parents to spend time with their children. However, teachers, on the other hand, play pivotal roles in the upbringing of children by interacting with them on a daily basis. Finally, students, who are interested in fields, such as art, literature or science, could learn much more specialized teachers. These teachers could provoke students into different fields, and lead pupils into deeper understanding, yet parents could not offer this to their children.
Admittedly, parents know their children much better by observing their upbringing through the years. They have only honest objections on the well-being of their children, while teachers do their duty because of their job. However, parents could not help teenagers as much as teachers, since they don't have enough information.
Taken together, it is not deniable that parents play a considerable role in children's upbringing. However, I believe that teachers play a more important role in the development of children since they are well-equipped with experience and knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...enagers as much as teachers, since they dont have enough information. Taken togeth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, thus, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53505535055 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99305896744 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.380622912 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215212633111 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806698635445 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507803666192 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145956194166 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497301837655 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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