It is true that working accomplishment is important in our live. There are amount of people willing to keep it in advance in order to receive a satisfying of life in working field. However, I believe that the satisfying of life in working has other way that we can achieve in life.
On the one hand, people who believe to join the work in advance in term of working life can fulfill their achievement in order to received the satisfaction they has achieve from work. They tend to believe that the experienced they had in this field is the way to reach the top of satisfied, so the earlier paths they get involve then the fastest way they reach. For example, if you working for the government in Taiwan, the working period is the way of promotion for employees and the long time you have stayed in a company, the more benefits you can receive.
However, there are some other way can be achieve for a satisfying working life. Firstly, working as habit, which means that the work you are interesting and satisfying. Most people had hard time with their job because they feel bore even annoy with their career, in opposite employee will feel more satisfaction if the job is relative to their habit. For example, if the job that people had chosen is enjoyable and relative to their interesting, they will be more motivate to complete their task from work. Therefore, if we can choose the job that we are enjoyable that is another way to reach a satisfying working life.
In conclusion, people have different point of views in their complement from work. Some people believe that the best way to reach a satisfying working life is join it in advance, while I believe that working with habit is easier to reach it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ent is important in our live. There are amount of people willing to keep it in advance...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other way that we can achieve in life. On the one hand, people who believe to j...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...order to received the satisfaction they has achieve from work. They tend to believe...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...r to received the satisfaction they has achieve from work. They tend to believe that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49503972007 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421568627451 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6832375279 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398190087761 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172217109689 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566354967167 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283973951869 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383425289089 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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