Transportation is necessary in today's world. people prefer any kinds of vehicle but mostly they like using cars and not public devices like buses or trains. In my opinion, there are many reasons behind this which I will cover ahead and believe that government may consider them essential.
First and the most simple cause is hassle free movement. As a person thinks using his own car is better instead of being stuck in a public transport. As far as I'm concerned they feel suffocated in buses or trains because of a large amount of travellers. Second, it takes less time to reach a destination as they do this with their own speed and precision. As far as buses are concerned they take much time because of the many stoppages they have to wait for the other passengers which kills time and trains are much worse in this case because of the late arrival and departure time.
Furthermore, there is no guarantee of the safety of the passengers as they don't know whether the vehicle is in a good condition or if the driver of the bus or train is in his proper senses or not as there are reports of accidents and turmoil on road because of this negligence. As soon as people hear about this in newspapers or in electronic media they get more determined to use their own wheels to travel avoiding the risk to their lives.
Although government is making sure of the safety measures of public transportation still this problem arises till this day. In my view NGOs and the concerned Ministry should launch campaigns on the emphasis of using a public transport like bus or train instead of personal transport like cars as this will help in inhabiting increasing traffic. Celebrities should take about the wastage of petrol and diesel and how a common man or women can save this essential commodity for the future generation by promoting public transport.
Fines should be levied on transport companies who doesn't maintain their vehicles and their staff properly even their license should be cancelled as a public safety procedure.
To sum up cars are a personal choice but using buses and trains should be encouraged as it has much benefits in general and government should take this matter more responsibly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: People
...portation is necessary in todays world. people prefer any kinds of vehicle but mostly ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t simple cause is hassle free movement. As a person thinks using his own car is be...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...car is better instead of being stuck in a public transport. As far as Im concerned they feel suffo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... stuck in a public transport. As far as Im concerned they feel suffocated in buses...
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Suggestion: don't
...of the safety of the passengers as they dont know whether the vehicle is in a good c...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ravel avoiding the risk to their lives. Although government is making sure of the safety...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...unch campaigns on the emphasis of using a public transport like bus or train instead of personal t...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ld be levied on transport companies who doesnt maintain their vehicles and their staff...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...d trains should be encouraged as it has much benefits in general and government shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, in general, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75718015666 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58096074826 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522193211488 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0583504031 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.466666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212340123084 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681713914593 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045254871156 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106037982604 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520759766383 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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