Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains Why do you think this happens What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains

Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per their distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether, people should choose to utilize personal cars as a means of transport while, others use to travel by public transportation. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. First of all, cars is a convenient vehicle to travel when compared to bus or train. People do not need to wait for a certain period for public transport when they have their own vehicle. Although, it is very expensive to buy a car and its maintenance. It is very useful in many ways. Especially, for families whenever there is an emergency cars are beneficial. People can buy bulk of materials and no need to carry when it comes to cars.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate, the first point of preferring public transport is that it is cheaper. Moreover, some people enjoys travel by bus or train. People can some money when they get use to travel by public services. For instance, no extra economy in needed to pay for tax and maintenance. Apart from this, now a days parking vehicles has been a big issue, however, those who are using public transport no need worrying about these matter. Therefore, more and more people choose to use public facilities to get around.
In conclusion, according to my perceptive, I concur that, although irrespective of negative sides, public transport is a good means of transport.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...s as a means of transport while, others use to travel by public transportation. Thi...
^^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...in. People can some money when they get use to travel by public services. For insta...
^^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...r tax and maintenance. Apart from this, now a days parking vehicles has been a big issue, ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...transport is a good means of transport.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8273381295 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66790100481 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5468841419 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9411764706 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194469831876 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659249132326 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675601327839 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102590767588 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652513147483 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.