Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, we live in a technologically advanced world in which most of the people have to work hard in order to earn money for making a living and in the majority of nations double income families has become the norm. While all of these efforts are for making more money, a group of people believe that some important things in life cannot be obtained by money such as health or happiness. To a certain extent I believe that we need money to provide a more comfortable life for our family, but I also think that some significant life schemes would not be achieved by money.
There are a variety of reasons why I would argue that money plays a central role in our lives. Firstly, housing and finding a suitable accommodation is an indispensable need in people's life and it is an important issue for everyone. Consequently, individuals have to earn money to pay for it and without money it is not easy to find a place for living. Secondly, although education is free in most of the developed countries, fellows who are interested in continuing their higher education have to pay for their tuition. A salient example of this is USA that provides free education for the elementary and secondary school but students have to pay for getting the admission of universities.
On the other hand, there are some valuable schemes in life such as happiness, success, health, reliable and supportive friends and family members and many other things that are not likely to gain by spending money. Due to achieving these issues people have to work hard, be open minded and ambitious as well as respecting the family morals. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that in China a majority of residents of rural and urban areas are trained to be thankful for the god endowed gifts and talents. They learn not to compare the life values with money and about 80% of the society feel fulfilled.
In conclusion, although money plays an undeniable role in today’s life, the fundamental values are not gained by money. People should change their attitudes toward life and have a positive outlook on life to lead a happier life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'suitable accommodation'.
Suggestion: suitable accommodation
...our lives. Firstly, housing and finding a suitable accommodation is an indispensable need in peoples lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76984126984 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65719242693 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529100529101 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5030493888 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.785714286 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142233435739 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540842220659 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298875012852 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935144711816 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143414796596 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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