Enormous numbers of human beings access social networking sites to stay connected with kith and kin and being aware with instant news. This essay will examine the merits and demerits using social media on the basis of connection and Information.
On the one hand, firstly, social media is irresistible part of mankind because of its pros in bringing old departed souls close. Moreover, precisely by a search on Facebook between school life and old age peers mitigates as social media encourages connection. For instance, Robert lee an American philanthropist founded an online donation trust to provide asepsis to deprived ones. Though, it established a platform in times of pandemic, to ensures safety. Thus, social sites can bridge the gap amongst everyone and expand relationships worldwide.
Second merit of networking websites is vast entitlement of data in hand. Even companies are advertising products online rather than jotting down pamphlets to disclose features of manufacturing to consumers even if they do, who bought newspapers anyway. For example, Due to Corona virus five million salaried employees lost their occupations because of shutting down of firms advertising posted online is helping in looking for another. As a result, Essential information can be discovered in time efficient and cost effective manner without physical connection to stay safe.
On the other hand, negative of social media are as follows, Access to any personal information leads to hazardous intercom with unethical hackers who jeopardize to have hold on bank accounts. Therefore, without awareness anybody can end up in trap and disclose vital details. Secondly it has reduced in person connect with one another which will lead to reduced personal socialization.
To conclude, there is an unending list of how social media is more advantageous in field of connection and information than its negatives.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4527027027 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87519650296 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658783783784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.49413956 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168155905418 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048244836256 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412206243304 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924667866931 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358392643425 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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