In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance.
what are the causes of this phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?
Sports improves the pride of the nation and build a good relation between countries. Nowadays, people in many professional sports are using huge amount of illegal substances to better their performance. There are several solutions to get rid of this situation. I agree to this argument and give my reasons for the cause of this happening.
On the one hand, there is occurrence of incidents like athletes are using different kinds of banned substances during their competitions of sports. Indeed, they are with a perception that taking some drugs can improve their performance during their play. However, this method should not be encouraged as it reflects the nations pride.
On the other hand, there are many precautions need to be taken to avoid these situations. Firstly, the authorities should introduce different laws against the usage of medications during the sports. Secondly, before the game starts the players must be tested to check whether there is any intake of drugs by the sports persons. Furthermore, the individuals involved in the sports must be known with the factors that are associated due to the overtaking of illegal substances. For example, if a sports person takes some medication before he starts to play then there is a chance to get eliminated from sports category and they may never have a chance to enter in to sports field.
After having considered all the above discussed points, we can finally draw a conclusion that, there are many negative effects which spoils the career of a sports man due to intake of banned substances so one must be very careful and sincere towards their play without cheating their co-players. Indirectly, it shows impact on the pride of nation. Government should take certain measures to avoid such occurrences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13058419244 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71076305165 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3762893053 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250892106625 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074821114959 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630227919817 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160237568001 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770533443557 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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