Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also had negative effects. Do the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, modern technology has improved human life in some aspects. An important outcome of this improvement is mobile phones. It has been making communication easy between people. It is not important where we are or who we want to connect with. We just need a mobile phone and everything will be available. However, the question is, is this kind of technology a favorable tool or an annoying one?
Many years ago, when the phone had not been invented, communication between people was a crucial issue, especially for family members or in the war. It was tough for two or more people to make a connection when they were far from each other. They usually used steam, smoke, loud voice or some hand movements or etc. to communicate with each other. Finally, the phone was invented by Alexander Graham Bell, the easiest way of communication which has been invented until that time.
In the present, there are mobile phones which help us get in touch with others even in easier way than the first type of the phone. There are many tasks for which we use mobile phones or the mobile technology to do or to perform easily. Parents are relieved now when their children are laten; they just take the phone and make a call to their children to know where they are. Cell phones have made the world like a small village. So, are there any drawbacks?
However mobile phones have made life and communications simple, there are some disadvantages that harm people and it can be considered as a disturbance. At schools, students take their cell phone to their classes. Doctors use their mobile phones even when they are doing a surgery. Drivers cannot stop using their cell phones even when they are driving. An influential cause of mortality is the usage of cell phones. In addition, mobile ring tones can easily annoy people around and also talking on the phone in the car or on the bus offends people too. Furthermore, researchers have revealed that cell phone signal is hazardous for human health, especially for pregnant women.
In conclusion, it seems to be fair to say that technology has been changing life style into more convenient ones. Lots of equipment are invented to help people. I would tend to agree with above mentioned statement if the knowledge of the usage of these kind of technologies have been trained to people and only then we could just feel their benefits, not drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...tement if the knowledge of the usage of these kind of technologies have been trained to pe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236442516269 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.182212581345 0.155533422707 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0759219088937 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650759219089 0.0501214627716 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0542299349241 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0954446854664 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.056399132321 0.0403226058552 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53233655315 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281995661605 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0824295010846 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130151843818 0.021408717616 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238611713666 0.011925033212 200% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2388.0 1933.35771543 124% => OK
No of words: 414.0 316.048096192 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76811594203 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299516908213 0.374742101984 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207729468599 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152173913043 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0990338164251 0.137316102897 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53233655315 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.037074148 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524154589372 0.56093040696 93% => OK
Word variations: 59.1736083392 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0891783567 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9230769231 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1326734019 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 127.492653851 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.814263465372 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 36.696023783 49.1944974215 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.28776978417 1.69124875643 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273112278015 0.332605444948 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0870308605027 0.102741220458 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0875582306968 0.0668466124924 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.427301371133 0.534860350844 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128264263645 0.148594505496 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812892999379 0.134430193775 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703042374347 0.0742795772207 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.271559365872 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108911717128 0.0638462369009 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165224011224 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650957679025 0.058150111329 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.68436873747 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 10.4468937876 211% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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