More and more money is being spent on buying tickets for sports and cultural events. Is it good or bad? Give your opinion.
Sports and few events are an essential part of human lives.Both plays an important role in their own way in terms of keeping an individual's interest alive. However, to spend hefty amount on any of the occasions is a personal choice.In my opinion,there is nothing good or bad in being a part of these events.
To begin with, cultural events do not take place as often as sports.In today's era, when there are ample of entertainment options available,these events have somewhat lost their charm.For example, if given a choice of attending an event or watching a movie,people will opt for second option.In addition, if there is some sort of match like football or the popular one cricket, people will not hesitate in spending money. Overall, it is all about a priority and an interest in such kind of things. IPL leagues gather the crowd in a larger population than a rock concert or a band.
Another reason that humans are ready to pay more is sudden increase in a salary and simultaneously, standard of leaving.They are now shifting to different avenues to have fun and frolic.Also, now there is a trend to do something unique. As a part of that; many are giving preference to live singing programs that involve their favourite stars.Organisers are taking undue advantage of this situation and they hike the prices, as they know psychology of today's generation.A similar pattern has been observed at literacy events, because everyone has become aware about an importance of knowledge and educaiton.Due to this, few organizers are allowing entry to crazy fans even at doubled prizes for games and other events.
To conclude,giving more money to attend either sports or a cultural event does not harm anyone at any level in general. Those who can afford and get a chance,are ready to be a part of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in general, kind of, sort of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90228013029 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9160317923 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641693811075 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.920502748 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.222222222 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7777777778 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197781338923 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686679198449 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670974256278 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115432172333 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518807506303 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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