More and more money is being spent on buying tickets for sports and cultural events. Is it good or bad? Give your opinion.
Expenditure on buying tickets for sporting and cultural festivals or events is on the rise. Certain sections of the society believe that it is beneficial while others are of a different opinion. Though spending a lot of money may not seem to be a good idea but it is definitely worth every penny.
To embark upon, in yesteryears people had limited options for entertainment like going for movies, having a meal at a nearby restaurant etc. As a result, they developed a lack of interest for such activities. Therefore, new and innovative ways of recreation have emerged. From attending a live football or a cricket match of your favorite club to watching your favorite band play in front of your eyes. Due to the sudden rise of the middle class in India with fat salaries, people are now shifting to different avenues of having fun and frolic. For example: Cricket and football leagues like IPL and ISL are drawing humongous crowds every year as people want to see their favorite sport star live at any cost whatsoever. Moreover, plethora of university students prefer to spend their pocket money on buying concert tickets and watch their favorite band play, rather than flushing out money on the same and boring movie or theater act.
On the other hand, even though there is a developing trend but there is definitely a flip side to this story. As more and more people line up to encounter their beloved sport or musician, organizers, taking an undue advantage of the situation have hiked the entry prices by manifolds. A similar pattern has been observed at literacy events like: music festivals and debates where not only ticket prices have gone up but the food and beverages available onsite are being sold at exorbitant rates, that too quite openly. Also, because of an increased rush and unavailability of tickets, few organizers are allowing entry to crazy fans by the means of charging them double or even triple the amount. For example: Tickets for a league match in IPL have a starting price of Rs. 5000 per person. So, a family of four will have to spend a fortune in order to see a cricket match. Recently, police have busted a ticket mafia who used to provide illegal access to few fans by selling the entry passes in the grey market.
To conclude, wherever there is good there is bound to be evil. Therefore, in my opinion, spending money and getting a good dose of entertainment will not harm anyone.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75771971496 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54420800986 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581947743468 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7144998237 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.421052632 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24495684158 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666579248572 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622272183074 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157269262418 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504395209604 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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