There are countless means of transport in many countries. Nonetheless, an increasing number of people who commute by automobiles has risen exponentially in recent times. First this essay will discuss why commuters travel by private cars rather than public transportation, and secondly will offer some suggestions to persuade citizens to use public transport frequently.
On the one hand, many people prefer commuting by vehicles because of innumerable causes. One of the primary reason is that it is considered as the most confortable way of traveling. Holidaymakers can stop at any destinastions to have break or to have lunch. When they feel tired, they can have a rest at the nearest hotel. It is also more convenient. There are not any bus and train routes in the majority of places which are on suburbs of metropolitan cities hense due to the scarcity of effecient public facilities, dwellers have to own their own vehicle. For example, a study by University of Ankara in 2018 revealed that 80% of university students commute by private cars given the fact that schedule of public bus is inconvenient for them. If it were arranged according to their needs or if there were subway systems, this rate would be less.
On the other hand, officials can take a plethora of steps to make public system widely used. To begin with, decreasing public transport fees will be an effective solution. Despite an one way ticket cost seems to fairly reasonable for many, cost of travel for a family can be quite affluent in majority of cities. For instance, after local council had decreased cost of public transport to half of it, the number of people who use it frequently increased from two million to six million. Further and more importantly, goverments can introduce laws to levy on tax for private cars and major streets in inner cities. Cost of vehicles which are cutting edge of computer technology is not afflucent consequently taxing them would decrease their sales. For example, a Mercedes car cost $100000 in Germany whereas Turkish citizen have to pay $200000 to puchase it due to high taxes rates in Turkey therefore sales of it is a hundred in average per year there.
By way of conlcusion, use of cars has become very common in today's world. Scarcity of convenient routes and unconfortable public system are two primary causes of this trend but many actions can be taken to reverse it. More subway system should be available to make public transport very popular among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93794749403 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72903319767 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558472553699 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6715894494 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5238095238 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311877165193 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795713798837 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458267971957 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178096821104 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306113812525 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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