Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?
The issue of breaking traffic rules has been matter of concern for people at large. It challenges the safety parameters and because of this many people opine that strict punishments can overcome this problem. While I accept this to a certain extent, I also think that other measures should be taken along with strict punishments to make our roads safer.
Undoubtedly, the strict punishments are vital to have the rules in place otherwise few people would not even bother to know the correct way of driving. In every country, the law exists to pay penalty for minor offences and suspension of driver's license for major offences. In fatal cases, the law even charge the accused person for Imprisonment. As and example, in 2004, strict law was enforced for punishing the people who drink and drive, resulting into reduced number of road accidents. This example proves that strict punishments are essential to make people follow the rules on regular basis.
Moreover, the other ways of managing the traffic parameters should not be ignored. Firstly, the driving license should be given only after scrutinizing the candidates driving skills. In some countries, the officials are bribed to issue the driver's license to the person who does not show adequate driving skills. Secondly, the administrative bodies should run the awareness campaign to motivate the citizens to follow the traffic rules religiously. Thus, the government initiatives would contribute efficiently in this area.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that only strict rules cannot be the solution to the burning problem of traffic incidents; the other measures such as awareness drives and checks on issuing of driver's license should also be followed rigorously to control the road accidents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27659574468 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65727560221 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.925860196 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235376932107 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816705635587 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427480872305 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140863771675 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306961026382 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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