Most of the world’s urgent problems are caused by over-population. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the booming of the population in many recent decades is the major reason giving rise to imperative issues for individuals and governments on a global scale. As far as I am concerned, I support those who agree with this view. The following essay will present some resources to demonstrate my opinion.
Evidently, the dramatic rise in population generates far-reaching consequences that reduce citizens’ living standards. Due to the fact that the competitive job market, companies, cannot accommodate a large number of applicants. It leads to the increasing jobless rate that would impose a burden on the authority and the society owing to the national funding must be allocated for unemployment. Not to mention that would be the lack of accommodation and basic living conditions, which means more people have to live under the poverty lines, such as residing in poor housing states, illiterate problems and the deficiency of health-care service. Image if there were not essential needs, they would likely to resort to illegal measures that threaten innocent residents’ safety.
From my perspective, I believe that there are detrimental influences on the environment when it comes to the surge in population. Initially, the excessive number of road users results in a greater level of exhaust fumes emitted from their means of transportation. Consequently, people’s health would deteriorate when they get enormously exposed to the contaminated atmosphere. Nevertheless, the rising demand for natural resources also brings about the loss of wildlife habitats. If the government does not make enough efforts to limit such exploitation, the eco-system will suffer serious damage and in turn, endanger people’s life
In conclusion, from my point of view, it is obvious that the demerits of overpopulation not only causes devastation to humankind’s surrounding but also creates a variety of problems to governments and the community. Therefore, authorities should make effective policies to restrict this matter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...b market, companies, cannot accommodate a large number of applicants. It leads to the increasing ...
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Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reaten innocent residents' safety. From my perspective, I believe that ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56869009585 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28514988709 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645367412141 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1786922481 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923618553184 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245846975225 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287728265729 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530975932497 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232065533148 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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