Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Museums and art galleries are places, which show amazing historical events and their related things to many learners. Some say that these places need to have more focus on works of native countries than other cultures from another nation while others do not. This essay will discuss why they think in this way and argue why another culture-art is very important.
To comments with, the one major advantage of showing native historical arts, which enhances traditions in the young generation. When people learn about their culture-related methods and things, they use them in their lives. This may result in passing all valuable information about culture to many people as possible, which decreases chances of extinction. In New Zealand, all galleries organized more paintings and works of their historical events, resulting in many teenagers started to learn older languages. The more focus put on the arts of own country, the more people familiar about it and become aware of cultural practices.
On the other side, it is necessary to learn about other cultures things too. If people learn about various cultural and historical events from galleries and exhibitions, it will help them to cope when they are in foreign countries. This has resulted in the income of the museums because people always have more expectations. The art museum in India showed that participants of India most tend to visit their art exhibitions when they put French and Spanish arts. The bigger collection of paintings and art of other countries' museums and galleries has, the more people attracts.
In conclusion, although showing more art about a county to its citizens will decrease chances of extinction, put more foreign cultures things grab the attention of people the most. In my words, showing more art about other nations is more advantageous even though its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1926910299 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6065150291 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524916943522 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0280512719 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231201930119 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894535399289 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516956556706 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159250372624 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572179143197 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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