n some countries in Europe some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education What should schools do to prepare s | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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n some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education.What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

To better guide children in learning knowledge and recognizing the real world, a larger number of schools now have opened various practical classes as well as abundant academic lectures for them. This essay will discuss what these classes are and how they can be beneficial to students in future work. Firstly, different practical skills enable them to improve their problem-solving abilities. Nowadays, many children simply rely on asking their parents to help them solve problems but they themselves do not understand why and what the reasons behind these difficulties might be. For example, all of them like tasty food but they find it difficult to prepare dishes. To help young people prepare food themselves, some schools have started cooking classes for them, which at last proves successful. It’s not only because they can cook by themselves but also they have learned how to cook food. Besides cooking, other skills like sewing, planting have all attracted a great number of students to join in.. Once they master these useful skills, they will use them and embed these skills in other related work in their future.Secondly, in order to make students have a deep interest in science and technology, a number of academic reports have also been prepared for them. For instance, some schools have invited some university professors to give students reports and some of the students who have a great interest are further invited to look around the modern labs to experience the feeling of doing experiments. After the participation of these classes, responses to these activities are all positive and most of them would like to choose to become scientists as their dreams. So, if schools always hold these academic reports and school visits to labs for children, a larger number of them will be beneficial and they are likely to develop a deep passion for studying science in and out of their class rooms and be determined to achieve their dreams. In conclusion, practical skills like cooking and sewing are really excellent programs for young children, which develop their minds and help them acquire the abilities for the future. Besides, academic activities are essential for their dreams. The whole society should encourage schools to open more of these classes.

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...r children, a larger number of them will be beneficial and they are li...
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...ldren, a larger number of them will be beneficial and they are likely ...
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...n, a larger number of them will be beneficial and they are likely to d...
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...r number of them will be beneficial and they are likely to develop a d...
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...mber of them will be beneficial and they are likely to develop a deep ...
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...of them will be beneficial and they are likely to develop a deep passio...
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...em will be beneficial and they are likely to develop a deep passion fo...
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... be beneficial and they are likely to develop a deep passion for studyi...
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...cial and they are likely to develop a deep passion for studying science i...
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...l and they are likely to develop a deep passion for studying science in a...
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... they are likely to develop a deep passion for studying science in and out...
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...re likely to develop a deep passion for studying science in and out of their...
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...e determined to achieve their dreams. In conclusion, practical skills like co...
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...to achieve their dreams. In conclusion, practical skills like cooking and s...
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...their dreams. In conclusion, practical skills like cooking and sewing are ...
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...eams. In conclusion, practical skills like cooking and sewing are really ...
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...In conclusion, practical skills like cooking and sewing are really excell...
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...usion, practical skills like cooking and sewing are really excellent prog...
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..., practical skills like cooking and sewing are really excellent programs ...
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... skills like cooking and sewing are really excellent programs for young ch...
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... like cooking and sewing are really excellent programs for young children, ...
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...king and sewing are really excellent programs for young children, which devel...
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... help them acquire the abilities for the future. Besides, academic activities ...
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...the abilities for the future. Besides, academic activities are essential fo...
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...ies for the future. Besides, academic activities are essential for their ...
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... future. Besides, academic activities are essential for their dreams. The...
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...re. Besides, academic activities are essential for their dreams. The who...
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...s, academic activities are essential for their dreams. The whole society ...
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...cademic activities are essential for their dreams. The whole society shoul...
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... activities are essential for their dreams. The whole society should encou...
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...are essential for their dreams. The whole society should encourage schools t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12668463612 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57452050967 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520215633423 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2762411542 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 163.0 5.01903807615 3248% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245922707879 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908866121143 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569822757222 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245922707879 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments