New parents should attend parenting classes to learn how to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion, supported by examples from your own experience.
Parenting, the act of training one's child is very important in today's society. A school of thought is of the opinion that in order to care for one's child properly, people who just had babies should attend trainings on how to look after their children. This essay disagrees with this view and I will give my opinion.
Caring for children can be learnt by guardians looking after their wards but it is not an assurance that the they will be good parents. For instance, a friend attended a child care training but turned out to be a bad parent because she learnt that beating her children is a form of discipline, and the child grew up to be very strong headed. In addition, some children get ill treatment from their parents all in the name of training them which leads to these children hating their parents due to the way they were brought up.
Rearing children can be learnt from people around such as one's parents, aunties and older siblings and does not have to be learnt by parents. For instance, a survey carried out by a student on a Child care research showed that majority of good parents learnt caring for their wards from the way their parents looked after them which emphasizes caring for one's children in the most beautiful way possible.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that recent parents do not necessarily need to be schooled on how to bring up their young ones because it does not mean they will be good parents and good upbringing can be learnt by watching the way other parents care for their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57818181818 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33738145499 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7002794395 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.888888889 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208652562862 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989127225187 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632150679249 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149785284913 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354604150858 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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