Nowadays children watch too much TV. Why is this happening, and what can be done to prevent it?
It is true that TV has become the main source of entertainment these days and children spend a lot of time in front of it. This essay believes that there are various reasons behind this trend, and there are still some solutions to tackle this problem.
There are different factors contribute to the phenomenon that children spend a lot of time in front of the TV these days. Firstly, there are more obstacles for children to play outside due to the low ratio of parks in modern cities. While teenagers could play and socialize outsides with their friends at local parks before, this option is not available in large cities anymore. Thus, instead of physical activities, children are forced to stay at home and watching TV or playing video games, which have adverse impacts on the mental and physical health of children. Secondly, parents spend more time at works due the rising expectations of firms from workforces. For instance, recent figures show a huge drop in the amount of time parents spend with their families in compare to fifty years ago. Thus, instead of having a quality time with their father and mother, a child has no choice, other than watching TV.
However, there are few remedies for these challenges. Schools should be obliged to enrich their after-hours programs with various activities, such as sport, art or programming. If children spend more time with practical activities at schools, they would have less time and energy to spend in front of the TV. Parents should also take more responsibilities regarding their teenagers and spend more time at home with their family. For instance, many companies have initiated work from home program recently, which help employees to have more quality time with their families. In this way, they could more often take their children outside for physical activities or stay at home and actively participate in their children's life.
In conclusion, this essay discussed several contributors, which lead children to watch tv for long hours, while two main measures introduced in order to help with this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0347826087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53381416854 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51884057971 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6715746759 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13746274061 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540482105915 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469630982466 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113947466829 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352696413449 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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